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03-05-2011, 02:39 PM
This is my first foray into fan fiction, I hope you like it, and apologies if it's not up to the standard of other stories.
This story contains scenes of an adult sexual nature, drug taking and some mildly obscene language so if you're under 18, leave now.
The story features former Neighbours character Hannah Martin (Rebecca Ritters) and maybe the first instalment of many.
Hannah’s Brave New World
Hannah decided she hated school; she wasn’t particularly clever, and none of the subjects interested her. Her teachers treated her like she was still a child – “fuck” she thought “I’m 14 now, I’m too old to be told what to do”. It had been a particularly bad day, two hours of math, her least favourite subject. She decided I’ve got to get out of this fucking place, so after telling the teacher she felt unwell, she just walked out of the school.
Using what little money she had, she caught a bus into the City and started walking aimlessly around the shops. After a while even this bored her, she knew she wanted some excitement in her life, but didn’t know what. She had heard her cousin Lucy talk about some places she had hung around when she was drinking and using drugs, so decided to try and find them.
After walking for about 10 minutes she was in a part of the city she’d never been before; most of the buildings were boarded up, and graffiti and posters advertising concerts by bands she’d never heard of were plastered all over the place. A girl was standing against a wall, smoking a cigarette; to Hannah she looked about the same age as Debbie, but was a tall, ebony-skinned girl, with a short skirt and a top that showed her ample cleavage. “You got a cigarette?” Hannah asked. “You’re a bit young for smoking aren’t you?” the girl answered. “I’m old enough” said Hannah, remembering she was still wearing her Erinsborough High school uniform. “Yeah OK” the girl said, reaching for her packet of cigarettes and holding them towards Hannah. Hannah took one, and lent forward as the girl held out her lighter.
“Hahahaha” the girl laughed as Hannah spluttered as the first taste of a cigarette hit her throat. She blushed, but was determined not to appear a silly schoolgirl, and took another puff off the cigarette. “So what’s your name?” asked the girl. “Hannah”. “I’m Kim, so what brings you to this part of town? “ “I was bored at school and I just kept walking” Hannah replied.
“Hold on”, Kim said, and turned into the deserted shop doorway, returning with a two cans of beer. “Want one?”, she asked. “Yeah sure”, Hannah replied. She opened the can and drank – this wasn’t her first taste of alcohol, at Christmas she had stolen some of her dad Philip’s whisky, and had loved the taste.
“How old are you?”, Kim asked; “Does it matter?” replied Hannah. “Not really, I’m 16 if that helps”. Hannah was surprised, she thought the girl before her was older. “I’m 14” Hannah said. “Hmmmm” Kim answered, just as a car pulled up in front of them. Kim walked straight to the car and leaned in through the drivers window. After talking to the driver for about 30 seconds she reached into her bag, and pulled out a wadge of dollars, which she handed to the driver in exchange for a plastic bag. Watching this, Hannah’s curiosity was almost too much for her to bear. “What was all that about” she asked as Kim returned.
“My idea of fun” said Kim, showing Hannah the bag, which was partly filled with white powder. “Come on” Kim said, starting to walk down the street. “Where are we going” Hannah asked. “My place, it’s too fucking cold out here” Kim replied. As she walked quickly trying to catch Kim up, Hannah started looking at the young woman in front of her; she was not much taller than her, but seemed to have legs that stretched forever, and her tight skirt left little to the imagination. She also started thinking how pretty Kim had looked – her ebony skin seemed perfect, and she had piercing blue eyes. She put the slight fluttering in her chest down to walking so fast
After walking for a couple of minutes, they stopped outside a red door which Kim opened and stepped inside. As soon as they were inside the flat, Hannah was struck by its untidiness – much like her bedroom, but much worse than either her nan or her dad would ever allow. Kim had gone into the kitchen, and returned with a bottle and two glasses. “Vodka?” she asked, “erm, yeah” Hannah answered. She took the glass from Kim and hesitantly sipped at the clear liquid inside. At first she thought her throat was going to explode, but she was determined not to embarrass herself in front of Kim, who was now sitting on a sofa emptying the powder out of the bag onto a metal tray, and making six rows out of the powder.
“What is that” asked Hannah, who had never really paid much attention to the lessons at school that taught them about the dangers of drugs. “Coke - it’s the only thing that gets me through the day” said Kim, who was now rolling a $10 note. “Sit down for a minute, and then we’ll have some fun” she continued, leaning forward and inhaling two lines through the note. She through her head back and as her long black hair fell backwards, Hannah realised what a pretty face she had got – her lips were full and Hannah surprised herself by thinking they must be great for kissing.
Looking around the tip of a living room, she realised the only place to sit was next to Kim, so she moved an empty pizza box, and sat down beside her new acquaintance. “I wondered how long before you sat down” Kim said laughing quietly.
“So Hannah, you got a boyfriend?” Kim asked. Hannah scoffed, “all the boys at school are horrible” she said, “they’re not interested in anything but kicking a stupid football around”. “Well, you obviously haven’t met the right kind” said Kim, “stick around and I’ll introduce you to some of my friends”. As she spoke she inhaled another two lines of coke and lent back on the sofa. “Can I try some?” Hannah asked. “Sure, but nothing’s for free in this world” Kim answered. “Well, I’ve got no money left apart from my bus fare home” Hannah replied. “There are other ways of paying” said Kim, handing the $10 note to Hannah, “you know what to do, I saw you watching me”. Hannah took the note, lent forward and took a deep breath, before snorting two lines of coke. “Fucking hell” she said, as her head felt like it was going to explode, and her nose hurt. Again Kim just laughed, but this time put her hand on Hannah’s leg and gently stroking it said, “you’ll be fine”.
Hannah was surprised to find herself getting ever more breathless as Kim’s hand ran higher up her leg towards her crotch. She looked up to see Kim staring into her face. At that moment she realised that for the first time since her mother’s death, she felt happy. Kim leant forward and her full ebony lips parted. As she kissed her gently for the first time Hannah slowly opened her mouth and felt Kim’s tongue slip inside her mouth.
She started to kiss Kim back, and within seconds they were kissing passionately. She felt Kim’s hand start to reach inside her school blazer for her blouse, and start undoing the buttons. “Hmmmmm you’re not a bad kisser” Kim said, pulling away. “Don’t stop” Hannah said. “Oh don’t worry, I haven’t even started” the ebony princess said standing up and pulling her top over her head; Hannah could barely stop herself from gasping out loud at the site of Kim’s breasts. She slid her arms, somewhat clumsily, from her school blazer, and then undid her uniform letting it drop slowly to the ground. Before she had time to think, Kim was pulling her plain white panties down. She groaned slightly as Kim started to rub her. “Tell me if you want me to stop, I can tell you’ve never done this before” Kim said. “Why the fuck should I want you to stop?” Hannah replied running her hands through Kim’s hair. Without saying another word, Kim shoved her back onto the sofa and gently pushed her legs apart. She moved forward and Hannah felt her tongue start exploring her hole. Fuck she thought to herself, as she realised she had never felt anything this good before.
Kim’s tongue moved expertly around Hannah’s clit, causing her to squeal in pleasure, “yes, oh god yes” she screamed. At that moment the door opened, and I walked in. “who the fuck are you?” Hannah cried, trying to push Kim away. “Her boyfriend – the guy in the car” I replied. “I can see you’ve got her nicely warmed up” I said. Kim laughed, “she’s all yours” she said as she pulled away. “What’s happening” Hannah asked, a hint of panic in her voice now. “You’re going to enter our world now” Kim said, as I stepped out of my trousers, my cock already hard at the site of two beautiful women semi-naked. “No”, Hannah said, “I don’t want this”; “tough” I replied, standing in front of her and pulling her roughly by the hair towards my cock, “now let’s see you suck me” I said. As she tried to pull away, I said “I’m assuming you tried the coke and liked it?”, “well, yeah” Hannah replied, “so you be a good girl, and there’s plenty more where that came from”. Again I pulled her roughly to me, but this time she opened her lips and hesitantly held my cock and guided it into her mouth. Slowly she started to suck, but soon with more confidence and closing her mouth tighter around me. Kim was snorting more lines, but unable to see an opportunity go to waste moved to back to Hannah and started to rub her hands across her tits. Hannah started to groan with an obvious pleasure. Soon I could feel the cum welling up inside me, but I wasn’t ready to finish yet.
I pulled backwards, Kim, realising what was happening, pulled Hannah towards her so that she was lying on her back. Surprisingly Hannah seemed to know what was coming, and was learning fast, “you promise me I’ll have coke after” she said “as much as you like” Kim said for me. “OK but be gentle, I’m a virgin” Hannah grinned.
One look at her tight little hole convinced me that I was going to have to be less than gentle if I was going to get my pleasure, but at least her playing around with Kim had made her wet, so I had an opening. I thrust my cock inside her, gently and only part way at first, and she let out a little whimper. Slowly I moved backwards and forwards, each time moving a little further inside her. “Oh yes” Hannah moaned, and I took that as my signal to increase the intensity of my motion. Soon my cock was almost all the way inside her, and I could feel her tight little hole opening up in welcome. “Fuck me harder” she cried as my thrusts became more and more intense. “You are a little fucking whore aren’t you” Kim said as she decided to join in the action, moving to kiss Hannah on the lips. I could feel the cum inside me welling up but I wasn’t ready to let my young conquest off quite yet. I pulled my cock out, “no don’t stop please” she said – no chance of that! On my instructions she turned onto her stomach, and I started to fuck her doggy style. Her screams grew louder as she started to beg to be fucked. Kim had moved behind me, and was now sucking hard on my balls as I started to pound Hannah’s pussy with ever increasing intensity. “Fuck me daddy, fuck me” the young schoolgirl cried, “fuck me harder”. I was now fucking her as hard as I fucked my coke whore Kim, but even a slut like her had never seemed to enjoy it as much as Hannah. As this was her first time, I decided to give her a choice – “where do you want it” I asked, “in my mouth, please daddy let me taste it” Hannah begged. I pushed Kim off me pretty roughly and she fell backwards, and immediately started to rub her own pussy. “Give it to her good” she said as I rolled Hannah over to her back once more and stood over her. She looked up at me, with her brown eyes pleading to be fed, her mouth open and her tongue hanging out. “Fuck me daddy” she moaned, and as the words left her, my load dropped into her wide open mouth. Still she wasn’t satisfied, and pulled my cock into her mouth sucking surprisingly hard until she was sure she had got the last drop of my cum into her mouth.
When she finally realised there was no more she lay back and smiled what in any other circumstance would have been an innocent schoolgirl grin. Kim, seeing Hannah’s pussy was dripping profusely moved underneath me and started to lick for all she was worth, trying to soak up every drop of the schoolgirl’s first fuck. Hannah moaned again, she clearly had enjoyed her afternoon, but she was determined that it wasn’t finished yet. As Kim finally withdrew her tongue, she asked “where’s my reward” with more than a touch of mischief in her voice. “My, you are keen” I said, reaching into my jacket which was lying on the floor, and pulling out a bag of coke. Hannah grabbed it off me and within seconds was snorting like a veteran. “So how do I get this regularly” she asked. “That can be arranged” I said confident that I had got myself a regular customer who would do anything for her new food.
This story contains scenes of an adult sexual nature, drug taking and some mildly obscene language so if you're under 18, leave now.
The story features former Neighbours character Hannah Martin (Rebecca Ritters) and maybe the first instalment of many.
Hannah’s Brave New World
Hannah decided she hated school; she wasn’t particularly clever, and none of the subjects interested her. Her teachers treated her like she was still a child – “fuck” she thought “I’m 14 now, I’m too old to be told what to do”. It had been a particularly bad day, two hours of math, her least favourite subject. She decided I’ve got to get out of this fucking place, so after telling the teacher she felt unwell, she just walked out of the school.
Using what little money she had, she caught a bus into the City and started walking aimlessly around the shops. After a while even this bored her, she knew she wanted some excitement in her life, but didn’t know what. She had heard her cousin Lucy talk about some places she had hung around when she was drinking and using drugs, so decided to try and find them.
After walking for about 10 minutes she was in a part of the city she’d never been before; most of the buildings were boarded up, and graffiti and posters advertising concerts by bands she’d never heard of were plastered all over the place. A girl was standing against a wall, smoking a cigarette; to Hannah she looked about the same age as Debbie, but was a tall, ebony-skinned girl, with a short skirt and a top that showed her ample cleavage. “You got a cigarette?” Hannah asked. “You’re a bit young for smoking aren’t you?” the girl answered. “I’m old enough” said Hannah, remembering she was still wearing her Erinsborough High school uniform. “Yeah OK” the girl said, reaching for her packet of cigarettes and holding them towards Hannah. Hannah took one, and lent forward as the girl held out her lighter.
“Hahahaha” the girl laughed as Hannah spluttered as the first taste of a cigarette hit her throat. She blushed, but was determined not to appear a silly schoolgirl, and took another puff off the cigarette. “So what’s your name?” asked the girl. “Hannah”. “I’m Kim, so what brings you to this part of town? “ “I was bored at school and I just kept walking” Hannah replied.
“Hold on”, Kim said, and turned into the deserted shop doorway, returning with a two cans of beer. “Want one?”, she asked. “Yeah sure”, Hannah replied. She opened the can and drank – this wasn’t her first taste of alcohol, at Christmas she had stolen some of her dad Philip’s whisky, and had loved the taste.
“How old are you?”, Kim asked; “Does it matter?” replied Hannah. “Not really, I’m 16 if that helps”. Hannah was surprised, she thought the girl before her was older. “I’m 14” Hannah said. “Hmmmm” Kim answered, just as a car pulled up in front of them. Kim walked straight to the car and leaned in through the drivers window. After talking to the driver for about 30 seconds she reached into her bag, and pulled out a wadge of dollars, which she handed to the driver in exchange for a plastic bag. Watching this, Hannah’s curiosity was almost too much for her to bear. “What was all that about” she asked as Kim returned.
“My idea of fun” said Kim, showing Hannah the bag, which was partly filled with white powder. “Come on” Kim said, starting to walk down the street. “Where are we going” Hannah asked. “My place, it’s too fucking cold out here” Kim replied. As she walked quickly trying to catch Kim up, Hannah started looking at the young woman in front of her; she was not much taller than her, but seemed to have legs that stretched forever, and her tight skirt left little to the imagination. She also started thinking how pretty Kim had looked – her ebony skin seemed perfect, and she had piercing blue eyes. She put the slight fluttering in her chest down to walking so fast
After walking for a couple of minutes, they stopped outside a red door which Kim opened and stepped inside. As soon as they were inside the flat, Hannah was struck by its untidiness – much like her bedroom, but much worse than either her nan or her dad would ever allow. Kim had gone into the kitchen, and returned with a bottle and two glasses. “Vodka?” she asked, “erm, yeah” Hannah answered. She took the glass from Kim and hesitantly sipped at the clear liquid inside. At first she thought her throat was going to explode, but she was determined not to embarrass herself in front of Kim, who was now sitting on a sofa emptying the powder out of the bag onto a metal tray, and making six rows out of the powder.
“What is that” asked Hannah, who had never really paid much attention to the lessons at school that taught them about the dangers of drugs. “Coke - it’s the only thing that gets me through the day” said Kim, who was now rolling a $10 note. “Sit down for a minute, and then we’ll have some fun” she continued, leaning forward and inhaling two lines through the note. She through her head back and as her long black hair fell backwards, Hannah realised what a pretty face she had got – her lips were full and Hannah surprised herself by thinking they must be great for kissing.
Looking around the tip of a living room, she realised the only place to sit was next to Kim, so she moved an empty pizza box, and sat down beside her new acquaintance. “I wondered how long before you sat down” Kim said laughing quietly.
“So Hannah, you got a boyfriend?” Kim asked. Hannah scoffed, “all the boys at school are horrible” she said, “they’re not interested in anything but kicking a stupid football around”. “Well, you obviously haven’t met the right kind” said Kim, “stick around and I’ll introduce you to some of my friends”. As she spoke she inhaled another two lines of coke and lent back on the sofa. “Can I try some?” Hannah asked. “Sure, but nothing’s for free in this world” Kim answered. “Well, I’ve got no money left apart from my bus fare home” Hannah replied. “There are other ways of paying” said Kim, handing the $10 note to Hannah, “you know what to do, I saw you watching me”. Hannah took the note, lent forward and took a deep breath, before snorting two lines of coke. “Fucking hell” she said, as her head felt like it was going to explode, and her nose hurt. Again Kim just laughed, but this time put her hand on Hannah’s leg and gently stroking it said, “you’ll be fine”.
Hannah was surprised to find herself getting ever more breathless as Kim’s hand ran higher up her leg towards her crotch. She looked up to see Kim staring into her face. At that moment she realised that for the first time since her mother’s death, she felt happy. Kim leant forward and her full ebony lips parted. As she kissed her gently for the first time Hannah slowly opened her mouth and felt Kim’s tongue slip inside her mouth.
She started to kiss Kim back, and within seconds they were kissing passionately. She felt Kim’s hand start to reach inside her school blazer for her blouse, and start undoing the buttons. “Hmmmmm you’re not a bad kisser” Kim said, pulling away. “Don’t stop” Hannah said. “Oh don’t worry, I haven’t even started” the ebony princess said standing up and pulling her top over her head; Hannah could barely stop herself from gasping out loud at the site of Kim’s breasts. She slid her arms, somewhat clumsily, from her school blazer, and then undid her uniform letting it drop slowly to the ground. Before she had time to think, Kim was pulling her plain white panties down. She groaned slightly as Kim started to rub her. “Tell me if you want me to stop, I can tell you’ve never done this before” Kim said. “Why the fuck should I want you to stop?” Hannah replied running her hands through Kim’s hair. Without saying another word, Kim shoved her back onto the sofa and gently pushed her legs apart. She moved forward and Hannah felt her tongue start exploring her hole. Fuck she thought to herself, as she realised she had never felt anything this good before.
Kim’s tongue moved expertly around Hannah’s clit, causing her to squeal in pleasure, “yes, oh god yes” she screamed. At that moment the door opened, and I walked in. “who the fuck are you?” Hannah cried, trying to push Kim away. “Her boyfriend – the guy in the car” I replied. “I can see you’ve got her nicely warmed up” I said. Kim laughed, “she’s all yours” she said as she pulled away. “What’s happening” Hannah asked, a hint of panic in her voice now. “You’re going to enter our world now” Kim said, as I stepped out of my trousers, my cock already hard at the site of two beautiful women semi-naked. “No”, Hannah said, “I don’t want this”; “tough” I replied, standing in front of her and pulling her roughly by the hair towards my cock, “now let’s see you suck me” I said. As she tried to pull away, I said “I’m assuming you tried the coke and liked it?”, “well, yeah” Hannah replied, “so you be a good girl, and there’s plenty more where that came from”. Again I pulled her roughly to me, but this time she opened her lips and hesitantly held my cock and guided it into her mouth. Slowly she started to suck, but soon with more confidence and closing her mouth tighter around me. Kim was snorting more lines, but unable to see an opportunity go to waste moved to back to Hannah and started to rub her hands across her tits. Hannah started to groan with an obvious pleasure. Soon I could feel the cum welling up inside me, but I wasn’t ready to finish yet.
I pulled backwards, Kim, realising what was happening, pulled Hannah towards her so that she was lying on her back. Surprisingly Hannah seemed to know what was coming, and was learning fast, “you promise me I’ll have coke after” she said “as much as you like” Kim said for me. “OK but be gentle, I’m a virgin” Hannah grinned.
One look at her tight little hole convinced me that I was going to have to be less than gentle if I was going to get my pleasure, but at least her playing around with Kim had made her wet, so I had an opening. I thrust my cock inside her, gently and only part way at first, and she let out a little whimper. Slowly I moved backwards and forwards, each time moving a little further inside her. “Oh yes” Hannah moaned, and I took that as my signal to increase the intensity of my motion. Soon my cock was almost all the way inside her, and I could feel her tight little hole opening up in welcome. “Fuck me harder” she cried as my thrusts became more and more intense. “You are a little fucking whore aren’t you” Kim said as she decided to join in the action, moving to kiss Hannah on the lips. I could feel the cum inside me welling up but I wasn’t ready to let my young conquest off quite yet. I pulled my cock out, “no don’t stop please” she said – no chance of that! On my instructions she turned onto her stomach, and I started to fuck her doggy style. Her screams grew louder as she started to beg to be fucked. Kim had moved behind me, and was now sucking hard on my balls as I started to pound Hannah’s pussy with ever increasing intensity. “Fuck me daddy, fuck me” the young schoolgirl cried, “fuck me harder”. I was now fucking her as hard as I fucked my coke whore Kim, but even a slut like her had never seemed to enjoy it as much as Hannah. As this was her first time, I decided to give her a choice – “where do you want it” I asked, “in my mouth, please daddy let me taste it” Hannah begged. I pushed Kim off me pretty roughly and she fell backwards, and immediately started to rub her own pussy. “Give it to her good” she said as I rolled Hannah over to her back once more and stood over her. She looked up at me, with her brown eyes pleading to be fed, her mouth open and her tongue hanging out. “Fuck me daddy” she moaned, and as the words left her, my load dropped into her wide open mouth. Still she wasn’t satisfied, and pulled my cock into her mouth sucking surprisingly hard until she was sure she had got the last drop of my cum into her mouth.
When she finally realised there was no more she lay back and smiled what in any other circumstance would have been an innocent schoolgirl grin. Kim, seeing Hannah’s pussy was dripping profusely moved underneath me and started to lick for all she was worth, trying to soak up every drop of the schoolgirl’s first fuck. Hannah moaned again, she clearly had enjoyed her afternoon, but she was determined that it wasn’t finished yet. As Kim finally withdrew her tongue, she asked “where’s my reward” with more than a touch of mischief in her voice. “My, you are keen” I said, reaching into my jacket which was lying on the floor, and pulling out a bag of coke. Hannah grabbed it off me and within seconds was snorting like a veteran. “So how do I get this regularly” she asked. “That can be arranged” I said confident that I had got myself a regular customer who would do anything for her new food.