Blackmist
03-18-2010, 09:11 AM
This one is shorter and may be less compelling but I wrote it early on.
Keira was the last one. A mysterious list was sent out of actresses that were to be hypnotized. At first thought a hoax, now they were all missing. Keira was at a news conference telling the news she didn’t believe in hypnotism. She wore a tight denim skirt and a white office polo. Even if it did exist she didn’t think she could be. She was in control of her mind. How could someone else control it? While fielding annoying questions, Keira scanned the crowd and saw someone mysterious in the back. She knew it was him, she could just sense it. He had come for her.
“I am sorry but I must be going.” Keira wanted to escape. Even though she didn’t believe she could be put under his spell there was no use taking any chances. She left through the back door. She gathered her things and then turned to the back door. She dropped her items in shock. The man was standing there.
“You know why I am here.” He said in a very persuasive tone.
Keira nodded. “Why are you doing this to me?”
“Because I want you; I want you to obey me and I always get what I want. I wanted the others too, but I let them go when I was done. You…, you are special, and that’s why I saved you for last, and I will keep you once you give in.”
“I won’t give in!” Keira bent down to pick up her things but stopped and looked up when he spoke again.”
“I think you will, Keira. I think it turns you on, to think about obeying a man, fulfilling his desires; deep down you want to obey me.”
Keira thought this statement was ludicrous but as she looked up into his eyes she began to feel very odd. Something in his eyes was drawing her in. As she was thinking about that statement he made she started to feel good because of the man’s stare. They became associated and now when she thought about obeying him she felt good. Keira knew this was bad and stumbled backwards.
“You feel it don’t you.” He pressured on. He could feel his power growing over her.
“No… what’s happening to me?” Keira was backed up against some boxes. A part of her now wanted to obey him.
“You are being mesmerized Keira Knightley. There is no escape, you were on list, you should have been prepared for this.”
"But I don't want to serve you! Why is this happening?"
"Yes you do. You want to be controlled."
The feeling was too much for Keira. It now felt so good to think about being entranced.
“YES...I want to...OBEY!" Keira chanted. She was on the floor in her denim skirt and white polo. She got up on her knees and raised her arms in a hypnotic manner. This was the sexiest subversion of all his conquests.
"No! Damn, I am going to give in, aren’t I?” Keira asked. She didn't think she was going to suceptible to the man's power but here was the proof. He could take any woman he wanted, including her. She didn't like it but she was helpless.
“You will fight it, but in the end, yes, you will succumb to my power.”
“Then... Then just do it! Hypnotize me and get this over with.” Keira willingly gave in and let herself be entranced by the man.
“Look deep into my eyes.” Keira did as she was told.
“Will you obey me?”
“Yes” Keira responded normally. She paused and then a spaced out look came over her. “Yes…”she said again.
“Yes…I will obey” Keira confirmed one last time in a very monotone manner. She bowed in submission to his will as she said she would obey. She was hypnotized and her mind was under his complete control. “ You are the master.” She chanted unemotionally.
The man made her go back out where many reporters were still around.
“I have been hypnotized.” Keira said this robotically. The reporters were shocked but no longer doubted the man’s power for they could see she was very much under his control. Keira left the room and they could not find her later.
Keira was with her master and she was obeying his every command. Keira was a good slave and she enjoyed serving her master.
Keira was the last one. A mysterious list was sent out of actresses that were to be hypnotized. At first thought a hoax, now they were all missing. Keira was at a news conference telling the news she didn’t believe in hypnotism. She wore a tight denim skirt and a white office polo. Even if it did exist she didn’t think she could be. She was in control of her mind. How could someone else control it? While fielding annoying questions, Keira scanned the crowd and saw someone mysterious in the back. She knew it was him, she could just sense it. He had come for her.
“I am sorry but I must be going.” Keira wanted to escape. Even though she didn’t believe she could be put under his spell there was no use taking any chances. She left through the back door. She gathered her things and then turned to the back door. She dropped her items in shock. The man was standing there.
“You know why I am here.” He said in a very persuasive tone.
Keira nodded. “Why are you doing this to me?”
“Because I want you; I want you to obey me and I always get what I want. I wanted the others too, but I let them go when I was done. You…, you are special, and that’s why I saved you for last, and I will keep you once you give in.”
“I won’t give in!” Keira bent down to pick up her things but stopped and looked up when he spoke again.”
“I think you will, Keira. I think it turns you on, to think about obeying a man, fulfilling his desires; deep down you want to obey me.”
Keira thought this statement was ludicrous but as she looked up into his eyes she began to feel very odd. Something in his eyes was drawing her in. As she was thinking about that statement he made she started to feel good because of the man’s stare. They became associated and now when she thought about obeying him she felt good. Keira knew this was bad and stumbled backwards.
“You feel it don’t you.” He pressured on. He could feel his power growing over her.
“No… what’s happening to me?” Keira was backed up against some boxes. A part of her now wanted to obey him.
“You are being mesmerized Keira Knightley. There is no escape, you were on list, you should have been prepared for this.”
"But I don't want to serve you! Why is this happening?"
"Yes you do. You want to be controlled."
The feeling was too much for Keira. It now felt so good to think about being entranced.
“YES...I want to...OBEY!" Keira chanted. She was on the floor in her denim skirt and white polo. She got up on her knees and raised her arms in a hypnotic manner. This was the sexiest subversion of all his conquests.
"No! Damn, I am going to give in, aren’t I?” Keira asked. She didn't think she was going to suceptible to the man's power but here was the proof. He could take any woman he wanted, including her. She didn't like it but she was helpless.
“You will fight it, but in the end, yes, you will succumb to my power.”
“Then... Then just do it! Hypnotize me and get this over with.” Keira willingly gave in and let herself be entranced by the man.
“Look deep into my eyes.” Keira did as she was told.
“Will you obey me?”
“Yes” Keira responded normally. She paused and then a spaced out look came over her. “Yes…”she said again.
“Yes…I will obey” Keira confirmed one last time in a very monotone manner. She bowed in submission to his will as she said she would obey. She was hypnotized and her mind was under his complete control. “ You are the master.” She chanted unemotionally.
The man made her go back out where many reporters were still around.
“I have been hypnotized.” Keira said this robotically. The reporters were shocked but no longer doubted the man’s power for they could see she was very much under his control. Keira left the room and they could not find her later.
Keira was with her master and she was obeying his every command. Keira was a good slave and she enjoyed serving her master.