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Canadian4Ever
10-01-2008, 05:43 PM
A quick look at what I am working on for Part two. I may revize some of it, to explain a bit more about what is happening, but this is the jist of how it will go. Also not I haven't done a spell check yet. I will try to have it up by the week end.


Death By Black Pussy
By Canadian4Ever

Chapter Two
Lil' Kim and Foxy Brown
FF/M, Interacial, FDom (more to be added)

Cold water washed over the bound man's naked body as he layed on the floor. Looking up he could see Foxy and Kim looking down on him, and he recalled the last events before he passed out. Quickly he tried to get to his feet, only to tumble over, much to the delight of the women who had captured him. With his head clearing he realized he was in the back of a van, not unlike the type the police call a Patty Wagon. The single white male was extreamly confused about why the two women had broken into his home, and why they had abducted him. Part of him was angry, another part was scared, and a thrid part was turned on. Of course his arousle was noticable right away.

"Would you look at that." said Lil' Kim pointing at the swelling member, "This honky can get it up under any condition."

"I told you them white boys was a bunch of perverts." repied Foxy Brown, "Sure they'll fuck a sista, but would they marry one, uh-uh."

Terry blushed bright red as he heard the women comment on the size of his dick. Lil' Kim laughed so hard she fell off the bentch the two were sitting on as Foxy ran off a ryme about Little White Dicks, and other unfaltering term. Despite the humiliating remarks Mr. James couldn't stop himself from reaching a full erection, and even though he wasn't nearly as long as he had been in his fantasy, he was just as thick, and both women seemed to take notice of that.

"Damn!" excalaimed Foxy, "His shit ain't half bad after all."

"I'm gonna suck it." said Kim with a shit eating grin, "Just to tease him."

"You are not girl, cause I am."

"What'chu talking about Foxy?" asked Kim.

Suddenly Terry, unable to controle himself, broke out into hysterical aughter. The two black women looked at him and then looked at each other. Then Foxy caught on and began to laugh as well, soon she was sitting on the floor next to the prisoner and they looked like two old friends laughing at Kim together.

"What?" asked the woman as she looked down at the pair, "What are y'all laughing at?" she demanded, and then it his her, "Oh so I'm mother fuckin' Gary Coleman now."

More to come as soon as I can

mosely
10-11-2008, 09:04 PM
looks very promising ! :)

Canadian4Ever
10-12-2008, 01:09 PM
looks very promising ! :)

I'm glad you liked it. I have been having trouble keeping my focus on my writing lately, but I plan to have part two compleated and posted.

bella
06-15-2009, 06:41 AM
Good so far. I hope you keep on writing

Canadian4Ever
06-15-2009, 06:34 PM
Good so far. I hope you keep on writing

Really? I'm actually not working on it anymore, I haven't worked on it in almost a year. I just couldn't keep my focus, and then I lost intrest. I was even thinking about having it removed.

bella
06-16-2009, 07:40 AM
I understand i am in a writers slump. Have bee for a long time. Prehaps if you start a new story.

Canadian4Ever
06-16-2009, 03:48 PM
I understand i am in a writers slump. Have bee for a long time. Prehaps if you start a new story.

I am working on a 2nd "Goddess Spa (& Dungeon)" story. You can find the first one in the Fetish section of this site.

Enjoy
C4E